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Dianne's Song

by Dale Neibaur

          We went dancing

                                            last night,

And on and on the music

                                                   swirled

                                                                              us

                                                                                           hither

                                                                              and

                                                      yon,

back and forth

                       across

                                  the

                                         floor,

                                                                   pirouetting

              with

                                                        wild

                                                                                                         abandon,

                               careless

                                              of

                                                   where

                                               we

                                 went.

It was great fun.

 

But came a moment

(as always does)

when the music stopped.

 

You                            looked                              at                           me

                 and                                   I                             looked                  back

 

       westolejustonemoreswirl

then

walked

away

arm

in

arm.

 

[I wrote this poem shortly after my first dance.  It was in the fall of my senior year, and the dance was my second date ever.  Thank you, Dianne!  I hope your feet have finally healed.

I also wrote a short-short story on this dance for a BYU class.  Read Fancy Dancer if you're interested.]

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